Interaction - Critique Form


Your input is very important!

Join the Creative Process!

These novels are work-in-progress!  Unlike published books, your comments can improve and change the course of the story.  All ideas and suggestions are welcome.  The best will be incorporated into the book, so you can co-author these novels with R. Friess.  He will acknowledge by e-mail when your suggestions are used, and your name will be listed as a contributor.  So send us an e-mail or fill out this response form and hit submit!

Please answer the following questions.  Also, feel free to e-mail with additional ideas, comments, and suggestions.

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What do you think of the story so far?

Who is the most intriguing main character?

Amber Young
Donna Van Arsdell
Brian Mayo
Chris Diteman

Who is your favorite supporting character?

Jim Mayo
Tommy Mayo
Sergeant Thomas
Mrs. Ladis
Lillian Young
Felix the Cat

What do you think of the writing style?

Additional comments. Please include any edits.

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Revised: September 20, 2000